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Rhetoric Sample Paper Reviews

-The role of writing in political science
1. internal citations
2. organization
3. good conclusion

1. between paragraph transitions
2. word choice
3. repetition

-Writing in Psychology
1. the purpose is strong
2. introduction
3. tone

1. Reference page done incorrectly
2. using quotes
3. organization

-Writing as a Creative Writer
1. organization
2. easy to read
3. reference page done correctly

1. short paragraphs need more support
2. repetition
3. between paragraph transitions

-Writing in the field of Economics
1. introduction
2. references
3. word choice

1. the organization was unclear
2. quotes could have been used in shorter ways
3. repetition

-Writing in the field of Engineering
1. reference page
2. internal citations
3. front page

1. paragraphs are long
2. conclusion
3. starts the paper with no lead up to the quote

-Writing in the business discipline 
1. organization
2. internal citations
3. introduction paragraph

1. blurry graphic
2. resource page, too few sources
3. conlcusion

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